F1GMAT's MBA Application Review Service (Essays+ Resume + Recommendation Letters + Application Questions)

The days leading up to the MBA Application deadlines can be a numbing experience.

You have captured what seems like an authentic life story with nuances of your journey captured in unique phrases.

When you show the essays to your family, they all nod in agreement on the brilliance of the storytelling.

You just wanted to make sure that the essay would resonate with an outsider.

The outsider is stumped.

The narrative is filled with jargon, only an expert in your industry understands

Two events are mentioned with no connection.

The transitions are poor.

The conclusion is a cliche.

The opening doesn't hook the admissions team.

The narrative doesn't address the question.

Don't be fooled by the opinions of family and friends.

Get your essays, resume, and recommendation letters reviewed by us, who have guided hundreds of applicants for the past 14 years.

With the MBA Application Review Service, we will review your essays, resume, and recommendation letters for:
1) Impact (By helping you shortlist the most impactful life events)
2) Transformation (By helping you find the transformation in the story arc. Stories that remain in the Admission Team's mind have a strong transformational element to the narrative)

Our recommendation will include steps to:
1) Make the narrative interesting by using W-Patterns
2) Group Paragraphs on Ideas and Narratives
3) Re-Structure the Essay to include the beginning, the middle, and the end
4) Improve the flow of the narrative

Included in Essay Review Service:
1) Creating interesting narratives
2) Line by Line Critique of the Essay
3) Editing to fit the word limit
4) Final Review
5) Unlimited Edits until you are happy
6) Clear recommendations to improve the narrative
7) Resume Editing
8) Guideline Document for Supervisors
9) Editing Recommendation Letters (if the Supervisor permits)
10) Help with answering MBA application questions

How to use our Service

After you purchase the $1495 Essay Review Service, send me an email at Atul Jose (editor@f1gmat.com) with the following:

1) The copy of the invoice
2) A copy of your resume and
3) Essays for review
4) Recommendation Letters for comments (if supervisor doesn't encourage direct communication on edits, we can initiate the communication)
 

Note: The Service is for 1 MBA Program.

Deliverable: For Example, If you have three essays for the same MBA program, including optional essays and application questions - all of them will be covered under the same $1495 package. The deliverable will also include resume editing and comments on the recommendation letters, with editing offered if the supervisor's writing is not competitive for a top MBA program.

For Questions on the service, email me at Atul Jose (editor@f1gmat.com) or Skype (F1GMAT)

Reviews
"What I like the most about Atul's Editing is his willingness to listen and consider my words before suggesting alternatives. Most consultants give recommendations with no room for debate. The crazy hours he puts into making the essay perfect is another quality that makes F1GMAT different. I went back and forth with him for nine versions of the Stanford Essay. I didn't pay anything extra for the additional edits. Highly recommend the review service. Ask for the three school bundle service" - Stanford and MIT Accepted (Stanford MBA Candidate)

"The extensive evaluation of my profile, along with intense debate on the possible career paths, made discussions with Atul an enlightening experience. He knows what he is saying and uses data to support the case. The Q&A for the impact table is another part of the service that opened my eyes to a couple of career paths. But the most useful service is the editing. After writing and self-editing the Wharton MBA essay, I couldn't shorten the length. Atul cut the words without losing the storytelling qualities of my essay. Before purchasing the service, I had purchased Winning MBA Essay Guide. It made the discussions on essay editing easier as he had already shared most of the essay writing strategies and storytelling tips in the book" - Wharton MBA Candidate

"The resume editing as part of the essay review service helped me take a step back from my profile. The pointed questions on my career, the validity of the data included in the resume and the template, helped me shortlist the most relevant experiences for the essay. Then it was all about capturing the most engaging story. Atul is a gifted storyteller. I didn't think that my essay can be transformed into an interesting story. But he did. I endorse his service and his book. Winning MBA Essay Guide is a companion book for anyone planning to get into a top program."  - INSEAD MBA Candidate

"Atul can be firm and at the same time patient with the editing process. I found the process nurturing and non-egoistic. He gives you complete freedom to capture your thoughts in the first draft. Afterward, he slowly cuts off the fluff and creates a clear story arc. It is an unique experience to see him play with words." - NYU Stern MBA Candidate

"The Responsiveness of Atul's Editing, the IMPACT table and the color coded comments were the differentiating value proposition I experienced while receiving help for my essays.The process made my writing and editing much easier" - Columbia & Booth Accepted (Chicago Booth MBA Candidate)

"I come from a FinTech space. With Atul at the helm of the editing process, I could see how my interpretation was translated for the admission team. The iterative editing helped us translate what seemed insignificant achievements to meaningful career milestones. " - Columbia MBA Candidate

"Atul is a brilliant strategist and editor. He recognized my weakness and communicated them in an honest way without ever putting me down. The balance of practicality and encouragement helped me set the right expectations and focus all my efforts on European schools as my post-MBA goal had much better recall when we quoted opportunities in the UK and Germany." - LBS MBA Candidate

"Darden's early-round deadline was a great opportunity for me to stand out. However, since leadership examples were not explicit in my profile,  I approached Atul to help me bring out the best stories. His brainstorming sessions are the best, and I could find narrative examples that I would have missed otherwise. Through an innovative iterative process, we found stories hidden beneath the mundane projects. With Atul's clever prose, I shared a couple of impactful examples. His support, writing, and editing skills were influential in my admit. I highly recommend F1GMAT's All in One service" - Darden MBA Candidate

"I am an aspiring Entrepreneur who found Yale's Integrated curriculum to be the best preparation for the complexity of a fast-paced global market. While communicating my drive for entrepreneurship in the essay, I couldn't encapsulate who I was and the biggest commitment I made. An event from childhood that Atul brought out from me became the opener that completed the missing piece for my story" - Yale MBA Candidate

"Thank you for breaking down the culture at Haas. It really helped me approach the essays with fresh eyes. Your editing style is much appreciated as I was apprehensive that my voice would get stifled with each edit. You took my best phrases, put the magic of your words and created a pitch that the Haas MBA admissions team accepted!" - Haas MBA Candidate